Recently launched new Repairs Website Check it Out

acidspin
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Recently launched new Repairs Website Check it Out

Postby acidspin » Fri Nov 05, 2010 10:03 am

Hey hows it going guys just wanted to drop a link to our new repairs website Please check it out and leave us feedback via email or comment box.
www.envigopcrepairs.com
Our Gaming Web site is being revamped as we speak! round two inc!

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techietrash
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Re: Recently launched new Repairs Website Check it

Postby techietrash » Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:09 pm

Looks nice and clean, seems to be iPad friendly, always a plus for me :-)

One suggestion would be that while I love that you have a blog linked and all, the posts on it could use some major punctuation, capitalization and grammar help, just so they seem a bit more professional and less run-on!

Great job with it, hope business is booming!

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Re: Recently launched new Repairs Website Check it Out

Postby Vashino » Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:57 pm

I clicked the link, firefox 3.6 running no script at 1440x900 and there was a huge white space underneath the banner. Might want a default picture there or something if scripts are disabled in the users browser.

Some grammatical errors around the site. Even a tiny mistake in a sentence structure is a major turn off for me, it makes a company look half baked. "Once we receive your system we run a series of test to pin point the problem and provided a detailed quote providing the necessary repair procedure for your system." I know your ability to write has nothing to do with computer repair, but a typo makes the company look less professional, and makes me want to go elsewhere. The site seems allergic to any punctuation except for periods.

Other then that, looks pretty solid. Good navigation. Very straightforward for getting what you want done, and very easy to contact Envigo from any section of the site.


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